Sep. 5th, 2016

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Your radiant smile
Still has the power to stir
My love-wary heart
So weary of Love's cruel games
I extend a cautious hand

Link: radiant stars to radiant smile
Attempt at kakekatoba (pivot word) with the wary/weary pun. Not sure I like it, I ended up repeating "love" as well. I suppose I might have used "Cupid's games" instead? Oh, well, tanka: one and done. Move on.

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